OMG guys
For the motherfucking sake of motherfucking christ..
how the hell did this get in top 5?:S
I dont say this is bad but well.. There are soooooo many waaay better songs..
I dont want to sound like an ass man, i'd love to help u sometime..
but i dont think this deserves a top 5.
here's my opinion:
The drums are kinda soft, needs some more variation and mixing.
The bass is a bit standard.. a layered saw bass and a sawwy thing.. and isnt really bassy lol.
The second synth u bring in.. that high one.. that one is waay to high man, it kinda hurts my ears..
The transitions arent that good, try using: Snare rolls, fills, sliced crahses and alot of other stuff to keep it moving.
That bloody distortion.. i believe its still pretty distorted..
The melody is nice!
Its quite repetetive.. try making a proper intro and a transition to put in the melody. instead of those wooooshes..
I may be a little rude here, for that i apoligize, but i have to say i dont like the fact that such songs as this get in top 5 so easy. Some artists on this website just own and they never have a chance to get at such places..
Overall:
I is ok, but it needs ALOT of work before it deserves this place.
G'day m8(if i didn't ruine it)
Denn-C
Sorry for being rude and all, i hope i helped. Ask me too help whenever u want.