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Hey man,

nice job here!

I like the flow of the song, the melodic and euphoric feel and the way you used all the synths to fill up this track.

In my opinion, there are some things that can use some cleaning up. This is for instance your drums. They seem to have been compressed away because you used some kind of limiter. Try Equalizing and compressing your drums more next time so they sound more clear!

The progression is very nice, allthough some effects to mark transitions could be doing this song well too, think about high pass filtering and 100%wet reeverbs right before your climax starts.

I hope you appreciated my review!

Check out my new track sometime too, if you get the chance ;)

Denn-C

MakerThe responds:

Thanks for the feedback :) Will probably revisit the song later and do something about the stuff you've mentioned. Also, do you know of any compressors that's especially good with drums? I'll go and have a listen to that track of yours now:)

Sick!

u got way better since the last time i heard you! Where can i find you, and add me on msn, i'd like to collab with ye some time if u want!:)
ask msn in private message if u want it;)

Im on FB too, search for Dennis Clement

u really got this master blaster kinda music here, awesome work man, great mixing!

hope to hear from you!

Denn-C

Lithorph responds:

Thanks dude :)
Yeah i hope i've improved.
As i am busy at the moment with some collabs and stuff i dont think i can right now.
But i will add you later and we'll talk more into this matter :D

Thanks for your awesome review!

Lith

Long time bro

Yoyyooo.

awesome song man ;)!

We should speak again sometime on msn :P

See u!

Meonly70 responds:

Hey man, how you been. :P I don't really go on too often anymore cause my music production is kinda slow from school, but I'll try too more often.

My msn is zakaryanhakop42@yahoo.com

WOWIE

Damn fucking nice;O i dont know what the fuck to say, to me this is just perfect;O teh mixing is fucking awesome;o it all just is=O

damn ur good:$

Denn-C

(L)

Kazmo responds:

I'm glad you think so! I still see a couple things I need to fix, but that's just me :P

Thank youuu.

Awzum!!

It was very fucking awesome!:O I loved that intro breakbeat:D and the vocals filled it all up very good:D The part i liked most of this was that filthy bitchy bass u got there:O.. What software do you use?

I got some tips for you though=D:
I think your main lead could be a little more phat, just layer it a little more or something:D and maybe put a delete on the reverb, to give the climax a fuller feel:D
Uhm.. The buildup was really nice, though i think the build of the lead could be more smooth:D Also try another snare for the snareroll next time.. and lower the volume of it.. it's a bit overpowering.. Try adding more to the melody next time.. 4 bars can make it pretty boring.. and instead of adding just some stuff to the beat, you could start sidechaining in the second part of the break:D It might give the kick more power too, though it's loud and clear to hear now:P

I really like the overall piece:D though i think there could be some improvements:P

Hope u will use my advice in coming songs!:D

And can u read my newspost:$? it's on my page;)

1<3

Denn-C

5'd

Ps:
Wanna collab sometime? We match in genres:D

Lithorph responds:

Thanks for your review man :) Although i wont be able to rework this since i cant find the flp for it :(

wow, this is gr8!

what bahdsdah sais is right;p the drop is indeed a little weak.. the build-up should've been a little better.. i never really made this kinda house, so sorry but i cant give u any advice.. it has this very cool atmos about it.. it's perfect for a houseparty, or for lounging:D i loved it man!

LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE

Denn-C

AlexCo responds:

Cheers :]

I know the drops weak, I couldnt be bothered fixing it. ;P

wowie!

It is fucking awesome.
I haven't heard anything this good from you before, this is by far the best you ever made! Those vocals are extremely well sliced, eq'd and all the stuff u did to it, is just fucking awesome! That bass is so fucking addictive, I can listen to this song all day.. U just made a song i was dreaming of making too.
Loved it!

fav'd
downloaded!

Ethalyn responds:

Thanks man! Much appreciated! I'm really glad you liked it, thanks for the review :)

euj.

nice, je bent echt veel beter geworden:P

Ikvind het een goed nummer, leuke melodie.. alleen vind ik dat je wat moet doen aan al die reverb en delay.. het zorgt voor een enorme troep, zo hoor ik geen structuur meer, doe wat aan de kick, die is veel te soft, en de bass moet minder clippen:P

Ik ben een klootzak, ik weet het::P

voted 5
een 8tje

Ciao;)

DJinside responds:

je bent egt een eikel ja:) nee thx man...ik zal het zeker meenemen in mijn volledige versie:)

way too long

its way too long man!

BOOH.

JKJKJKJK. It was fucking great=D u saw my comment on utube;d

seeu!

not more of the constructive reviews anymore;p

Ethalyn responds:

Lol, thanks dude (Y)

My opinion;D

HMM! Nice =D
It has a nice overall feeling but there are alot of things you could work on:P
the intro is nice.. but the fact u used the same samples as in your main beat isn't very good in my opinion.. I think you could be more creative with the breakbeat too.. it doesnt fit with a huge strong kick which you used:P
there is this noisy cracky sound through the whole song.. Get rid of it :$ I don't like it:P The beat was nice, but still quite simple if i hear that right:P But for 4 hours of work, pretty good song:D
I understand that you don't want to make things repetetive but this changing bassline sort of thing is bothering me.. Try keeping in one bassline, but adding more synths, and make the beat complicated.. just ayou told me.. now try for yourself too then:P
The end was good, the perc thingy, i loved it:D
The bass was very nice:D I think this'd be pure electro sound though.. It doesn't have alot of aspects of real electro house in it:P i can send you some cool songs to listen to to what i think is real electrohous:D
these swirly pads throughout the song were pretty cool, not to abrupt and stuff, good work:D
I take my words back on the mixing, it sounds pretty fucking good, it all matches well, and i can hear everything clearly:D
It was a pretty good song, though i somehow know that you could do way better..
in my opinion, buildup is your weak point..
This sounds good, though i doesnt give me the feeling of a full song-like.
I want to help you with that if i may, and if ur not mad at me now for my criticism..
I liked it, don't get me wrong, these chords were gr8, the bass was fucking awesome, but there are so many things you could learn, i know i'm not that good.. but i think i still have the rights to tell you these things:$
so!
Keep it up, you'll get there :D
i somehow think that we are both born to make music:P Look how early we started, and what we've become.. we are both still into this shit:P

NICENEZZ!
4/5 tbh
8/10

G'day m8!
Denn-C

Swerve responds:

I don't hear a crackling noise.. Hmm. Well, to be honest this is sort of a joke/test thing, I just wipped this up in like 4 hours. The beat was supposed to be simple, that is called a minimal beat lol. But you might be right, if I would be taking this track for a proper revisit, then I might add to the beat. But not too much. Less is more, as they say. Complicated beats ain't always the shit.
Changing bassline? You mean the different patterns for the bass? Well that was intentional, as the song mostly centers around the cardboard bassline, so I tried to keep my main element varied, if you understand. It has some DnB influences in bass-terms, so it has to be "changing".
Build-Up indeed is one of my weaker points.. I'm not too good at that hehe. Ah well.. I'm improving there tho, I'm not fading everything in and out anymore.
Well it does not have the feeling of a full song, because it is not a full song, lol.
Yeah, starting with eJay at age five lol, and still going strong.
Have a good one, and thanks for the review mate!

Swerve.

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