My opinion;D
HMM! Nice =D
It has a nice overall feeling but there are alot of things you could work on:P
the intro is nice.. but the fact u used the same samples as in your main beat isn't very good in my opinion.. I think you could be more creative with the breakbeat too.. it doesnt fit with a huge strong kick which you used:P
there is this noisy cracky sound through the whole song.. Get rid of it :$ I don't like it:P The beat was nice, but still quite simple if i hear that right:P But for 4 hours of work, pretty good song:D
I understand that you don't want to make things repetetive but this changing bassline sort of thing is bothering me.. Try keeping in one bassline, but adding more synths, and make the beat complicated.. just ayou told me.. now try for yourself too then:P
The end was good, the perc thingy, i loved it:D
The bass was very nice:D I think this'd be pure electro sound though.. It doesn't have alot of aspects of real electro house in it:P i can send you some cool songs to listen to to what i think is real electrohous:D
these swirly pads throughout the song were pretty cool, not to abrupt and stuff, good work:D
I take my words back on the mixing, it sounds pretty fucking good, it all matches well, and i can hear everything clearly:D
It was a pretty good song, though i somehow know that you could do way better..
in my opinion, buildup is your weak point..
This sounds good, though i doesnt give me the feeling of a full song-like.
I want to help you with that if i may, and if ur not mad at me now for my criticism..
I liked it, don't get me wrong, these chords were gr8, the bass was fucking awesome, but there are so many things you could learn, i know i'm not that good.. but i think i still have the rights to tell you these things:$
so!
Keep it up, you'll get there :D
i somehow think that we are both born to make music:P Look how early we started, and what we've become.. we are both still into this shit:P
NICENEZZ!
4/5 tbh
8/10
G'day m8!
Denn-C